[Adonis]

Dam - I liked this concept a lot brotha, you executed well with one exception. Some of the rhymes came off as almost too simple, almost like you used the first rhyme that popped in your head each line. But aside from that, as I said, the content was rather good so I really can't complain about it. All in all a solid, enjoyable verse. Good shit.

Inno - the opening stanza seemed like lucifer writing a letter to god, I thought that was a dope concept, really the entire verse was a nice concept. I'm a bit torn if through out the verse you speak of Jesus or not, because you mention "evil HE spews", and jesus did not. But I like how stuck to the knowledge of lucifer being in heaven and him being the chosen evil so good would be known. it was pre-ordained and I feel you stayed true to that. Flow was slightly choppy here and there due to wording issues. All in all good verse though.

Vote - close match, but in the end Inno's tugged more on my heart string. He wrote something right down my ally, as you both did, but I just liked his a bit more.