needs either more internals/multies for the flow to be on point or shorter lines.
generally in S&F people tend to go the more is more approach, so i'd go with the former.
some of this seemed madd lazy though:
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Literally, my flow is oh so incredible and my timing is oh so impeccable
Seriously orc get me on the voters list, chyeeeh will vouch for how my votes are credible
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oh so who gives a flying fuck? Sounds like you're begging for acceptance in that bar rather than just taking what you want.
you lose swag points for that IMO.
you're better than this.