Chyea, you do your own sort of thing and I really enjoy your style for what it is. Completely unique and dope in its own right. The one thing that stands out as a weakness with this style, however, is the rhyme scheme. Normally (in my opinion), that doesnt take away from your verses enjoyability for me. A bit different in this circumstance since thats a crucial aspect of the s&f genre. I enjoyed the verse but felt that was the one weak point.
Nik. Couple portions of the a few lines, like one individual multi here and there, could probably have been reworded to enhance the line, but overall this was a solid lead. You had a lot of dope concepts that were accentuation with a strict and balanced flow. Pluto with the bare eye and ruder Kruger stand out. Good shit
+1 Nik
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