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Old 05-16-2013, 07:30 PM   #12
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Boredom: I enjoyed the read. Cool shit, decent flow etc., but I felt like your verse was more battle-ish at times rather than swaggin' it. Either way, I liked the ''Headshot'' and ''Hanzo''-line.

Cashius: Enjoyed the read from you as well. Some dope lines in there, great flow and rhymescheme. I thought it was pretty much dope all the way through , but this;

''What you've written's useless, like a chick who's boobless.'' <-- Thought this was embarrassing to read tbh. ''Boobless''... Really? Seems like a forced multi as well. I understand what you're trying to do but I didn't like this shit.

Vote: Thought it was pretty close and it boils down to which verse I liked the most. Beside of the ''boobless'' thing I think Cashius had doper concepts and more swag to his verse when it comes down to it. To clarify; I vote for Cashius. Cool battle.
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