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Old 08-06-2016, 07:09 PM   #15
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kennys breakdown

“Youre "nice". A "beast". "Fire". "The king of rap on the web"”
(Good starter. Good jab. 1 point.)

“Yyyyea ight, keep pitching that shit & you'll wind up with a bat to the head”
(Ouch. Solid line. 1 point.)

“Slashin ya face til im tired as fuck, no need to wig & bust off the glock”
(Kenny is on a roll here. Internal rhyme works out nice. Solid line. 1 point.)

“Cuz swingin this large shank is taxing enough & its taking a big cut off the top”
(Im not sure if this flows that well, but the content is great. 1 point.)

“Ur mom'll do gloryholes for a line of coke, she's literally an abuser”
(This punch. Damn. 2 pts.)

“If thats how the story goes i'll server work in a bathroom like Hillary's computer”
(Solid, with great reference. 2 pt.)

“Mean with tools, s'like i fiend to shoot, bringin beef to u & ur people too”
(Nice. Internals jump around here and paint a vivid picture. 2 pts.)

“Ill spin around ur block & take shots til u get the picture, google street view u”
(Shit. Continues the punch, nice multi at the end. 2 pts)

“No comparing whose got the better hoes, biggie voice- my cliques imperial”
(Kenny is still on a fucking roll. I loled at the biggie voice part. 1 & ½ point)

“My bitches flyer.. pure fire, yours could b Nitro girls and still not be #WCW material”
(I said it already. 1 & ½ pts)

“Ur a fuckin scumbag, i kno ur dumb mad cuz u cant bite & sway, cheating is weak”
(Solid jab here, flows well. 1 pt.)

“Strikt rules apply here fag, thats a bodybag & u ghost from the tourney immediately”
(Ok very well done muti, good finisher, and is that a @Strikta reference? 2 pts.)

Kenny the OG: 18 pts

untolds breakdown

“kenny craves net attention, a single rep has him thinkin he's boss n best”
(Shit. Ouch. Good start. 1 pt.)

“that 1 rep holds more weight to him than Bags throwin 315 up, n off his chest”
(Damn. Multis, insults, flow. This has everything. 2 pts.)

“ain't nobody believin this guy kill. u won't be standin after the 9 spill”
(Good punch. 1 pt)

“bitch, i'll leave the mag so empty... Strikta'll get accused of murder before i will”
(Shit, the threat hits hard and still Untold is getting away with it? Damn. 2 pts)

“i dunno what's more of a joke? this pres election or u thinkin u sonnin me”
(Good reference. Good put down. Solid line. 1 pt)

“hell, u prolly think ur a Don! wow everyone, we have the 1st black Trump wanna be”
(HAHAHAH. This is great. The multi here is so natural, and the Trump insult hits hard. 2 pts)

“plz don't start wit the gunplay, cuz i'll laugh claimin this G shoot”
(Ok Untold is now officially on a roll. 1 pt.)

“i ain't seen a bitch packin this much fake heat since the Ghostbusters reboot”
( I’m laughing lmao. This one hits pretty hard honestly. And the Busters ref is supreme. 2 pts)

“n we know u aint a mac. its false claimin u breakin backs”
(Good jab. Not even, this is a full fledged punch. 1 pt.)

“only time a pussy kneads u is when they're tryin to get comfy n take a nap”
(Good multi and delivery. Cat ref is spot on. 1 pt.)

“lets be Frank! u'll sob an Ocean when i rape ya whore”
(Damn, this reference is spot on. 2 pts)

“ironic Boys Don't Cry drops tomorrow.. yet this bitch'll be drownin in tears a day before”
(DAMMMMM. He called him a boy. Not a man, a boy. He said he’d be drownin in tears, after being tyb’ed. Frank Ocean hasnt dropped. Too many things are good in this line. 3 pts .)

Untold: 19 pts

Summary:

Both hit hard in this, but Untold had more dope references.
Kenny the OG:18 pts
Untold: 19 pts

Vote Untold.
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