This battle comes down to execution to me. Plot had some really solid concepts but the style was worded a but archaic. A little triming of words here n there would of made a big difference. Liked the rabbit hole line n the closer was a good effort. Karp onebofbtye best tho so u have to be nearly perfect to win. Pokemon line was concise. Aero line was funny n Rican was lotb. Good battle guys.
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