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Old 07-29-2016, 02:08 AM   #10
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mostly it's bullshit. Some of the times I prattle the truth
stepped outside of space/time. The truths I've had to embrace
mortal steps taken with faith will alter matter and space
This one truth has many layers - it's a matter of taste
to leave this life of trials depressed or floating battered in grace

^^^^
this whole switch up was pretty nice
the start of the verse was sick though.
every other line was scathing and had some nice lines
that over 60 & still looking gorgeous made me lol
a lot of sick rhymes in this shit though
really liked passionate loop/had to redo.
that was dope...overall a pretty sick piece
keep it up.
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