There was a great use of multis here man. Internal rhyme scheme was dope as fuck. Some of the lines were pretty Ok though in terms of concepts, The last 4 or so were pretty sick:
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Set it straight; above God, skill and demons.
Aint hailing from Sweden.. I'm alpha omegas perspective.
Halla balla, I'm norwegian; The viking striking lightning back at its face,
rackin' the grace of Thor, warlords, Valhalla, space, earths core and the fjords in one word..
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The wording here was pretty nice. But like I said, the concepts outside of these were either pretty nice like that pac line and dali line, or just ok. Still though, your flow on here was on point. I like how it got choppy there in the middle part, that transition was seamless. Good verse