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Mr. J · 07-27-2016, 02:37 AM

I dont really know how to take this piece at first.
this is like going to down to an underground open mic to me.
you know all the cool people do it though with their pabst & menthol cigarettes
you sit down & your like this could be an interesting thing
next thing you see Eve on stage & she starts by saying...

MY HAIRCUT MAKES ME LESBIAN
MY GIRLFRIEND MAKES ME LESBIAN
i want to be cool someone....lets be friends

Im not saying that this is bad but this is an odd introduction.
thank you for exposing yourself to me & making the read worth my while.

07-27-2016, 02:37 AM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I dont really know how to take this piece at first. this is like going to down to an underground open mic to me. you know all the cool people do it though with their pabst & menthol cigarettes you sit down & your like this could be an interesting thing next thing you see Eve on stage & she starts by saying... MY HAIRCUT MAKES ME LESBIAN MY GIRLFRIEND MAKES ME LESBIAN i want to be cool someone....lets be friends Im not saying that this is bad but this is an odd introduction. thank you for exposing yourself to me & making the read worth my while. __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you