lol Im not going to listen to that...
but I will give you feed...
I stopped at bullshit walks & lold at mache...
otherwise this had some impressive rhyme work.
quite enjoyable with some minor alteration would be cool.
nice little freestyle that you got worked up here
mobile home/know it yo made me shake my head.
spread to Ohio, home where the champs reign
wipe CHAMPAGNE off the trophy, leave it in its GOLDEN state
pun intended, niggas mug with blunt expressions
uninvited, they POP STARS, send bullets "One Direction"
^^^
bruh...what?
you said champs reign/champagne pun intended/blunt expression/POP STARS/one direction?
what....that was a cool little idea back in 2013 or something.
I know everyone is a fan of them KOTD shits around here and all that but...chill...
try to do something fun, add a little flavor to this & maybe Ill peep again.
nice concepts mixed into this piece. dont want to listen to that audio though.
maybe Ill give it a chance...
nice work MC Shaz
__________________
.....laugh....and the world laughs with you
|