[Mr. J]

An interesting piece from the start of the whole thing.
You toy with the flow quite well & it seems quite familiar
regardless I thought the overall concept was pretty sweet
you had some memorable lines spliced up in there that I liked


While engineers can write a program and force them to quit
our ethics seem less Darwin and more a war on the rich.
I'm sitting due proper with a blue collar huffing the fumes,
fixing something in the plumbing or roof,
suppressing moods so I can fill my supper with food.

this felt nice but felt weird near the end of it all
the whole nerve of fortune/butler is rude thing was eh

I'm sweating. Fixing a house bigger than mine.
I could be an entertainer; spitting my rhymes,
or a fucking code monkey writing unequivocal lines,
but I prefer to help my community on the physical side.

I liked this until I got to the physical side...that is odd
works with the whole scheme though. I can appreciate that
it was pretty redundant to what you said at the start of the rhyme though.
but I enjoyed this for being your...first drop here? no? maybe...
regardless nice work.