[Objective]

Enjoyed the closure to the verse, it made think abit more about the shit you said. Short and sweet verse. I thought it would also build up in terms of the rhymescheme as the verse progressed as well, but it didn't. It's cool with a simple rhymescheme but personally I would have liked to see a little bit more on that department. I read it more as a poem the way it is now. Either way; The content was cool enough and easy to grasp, allright concept but it lacks that little extra imo. Keep dropping.