07-23-2016, 06:43 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2015
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Originally Posted by CopyPat
You guys are easy targets, so why compete? Retarded? I’m fire with speech, you’re dying of heat, my dialect leaves ya gutted. I’m higher than being a hundred, I’m higher than queens in London, I’m higher than even fuckin Ireland seems from Russia.…Which is basically a lateral so I’m kinda confused…My brain just seems illogical when rhyming these tunes. Cause I am the dude with the poisonous pen, writing improved, turnin boys into men. And that last part was weak and a little bit wack, so let me trash talk you geeks wearin feminine pads. I’m a grass sparkin genius when I get in the hash. So let me hashtag my penis like #GETINDATASS.
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LMAO
my dad is alive btw
This was dope though, I can't even critique haha it's all so necessary to being a CopyPat verse. Schemes were dope especially in this part, not so much the end. KEEP WRITING
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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah
I'm going to start off on a tangent.
when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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