ok ok....
first up this Beat didn't do nothin' for me....took away from the track in my opinion...You got a nice flow tho' delivery stayed consistent
first verse felt like u juz warmin' up...or maybe it's me not used to this beat yet
Hook eh....again wit' the beat
2nd verse- Ok now you pickin' up steam... diggin' the rhyme scheme an energy, Background vocals poppin things out nice... yea this 10 times better then first verse...u killed that one
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3rd verse... 3 sheets to the wind line haha
short...felt like this shoulda been longer...I'd like to hear you ova somethin better this whole beat kinda bugged me....feel me? But as a MC you did your thing... nice polished style
Good Listen, glad to see someone on here rockin' Mics right
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