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Old 05-16-2013, 01:24 AM   #9
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Didnt get a lot of the references because I don't listen to Kanye...maybe my only thing I didn't like about it...Maybe dub it down a little bit for the people like me...I got some of it don't get me wrong but didnt quite get all of it...So tbh I don't really know if u gave urself away or not...Also not really sure if u were going that route...If u were lol I had no clue until the end...

This was pretty good like everyone else has said...Everything was up to par with some nice concepts in there...Vocab was pretty good and u defly showed ur knowledge and the topic at hand...I wasnt blowed away by it but a decent read nonetheless...

Just not my style I guess but for what it was it was good...kept my attention through out and there's no reason to un-center ur verse... A lot of narrow minded dudes on here...Sometimes it does look tacky I will say but here it's fine because u used a pic...makes it look Better IMO if u center a verse around a pic...

Good shit
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