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Originally Posted by Destroyer
this aint nba 2k but u still gonna be cryin how it isn't fair
& u gonna hear lots of clapping when i pull up on the right...stick & hit this square
ur dead & over. peeped ur season run... u aint no soldier
ur only facing me cuz bags retarded like the dude i always get at kroger
des ain't this man's best friend, this a bloody battle to see who will still stand
when i say it's dog eat dog, dont break out the soy sauce - i aint talking ur meal plan
come & throw blows... it's a fatality when i drop this homo
dude be draggin all twisted with his tongue hangin out like the mortal kombat logo
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Nice showing, crisp wording & cleverness, it's just your concepts tend to be too simplistic and/or too familiar. Otherwise dope verse & propers on yo tourney run.
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Originally Posted by Infiltration
u got bi ways...dating a girl w/ a boys chest proves this guys gay
I'll send dog to the afterlife... crossing a rainbow bridge for painting em on pride days
des lines read forced as shit...trash to be left on the corner quick
bags was tied up... now I'm sweeping this speck to the side; call that city ordinance
My squad is meannn.. mechanical w/ the arms; quickdraw & squeeze
grippin those things steadyyy... metal lift ya animals like games w/ the claw machine
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Naaaahh, too many reaches conceptually, your wording's really polished & even that didn't help some of those concepts come across. 'Claw machine' was dope & the other quotes were solid, but the majority of this verse fell flat.
Overall
DESTROYER got another upset imo, Inf forced a few of his bars & hurt himself.