[PancakeBrah]

In a way, I guess. Not really. It takes too much confidence to be that sure, and direct. My problem with your overtly didactic verses, which is all of the verses I've read from you besides this, is that there's no effort given to form, which is what makes Open Mics interesting. To me at least. It's all information and orders, the actual art of writing taking a back seat. I don't necessarily agree with the idea that everyone, or that all the writing here, is didactic, but if I did, I think you still go about it the wrong way.