Man, this was such a fresh read for me. The wording in the first paragraph was amazing. Internal rhymes that a lot of people will probably not notice were natural as hell. The master the effort line was amazing, pretty much the whole section from there to the end of that paragraph was witty and full of wordplay, the closer was something I relate to heavily as well. Didn't like how the second paragraph was a lot of breaking the fourth wall in terms of writers voice, but it was still enjoyable. Excellent read. Thank you.
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