[PancakeBrah]

the gulf between your feigned values and the actual proof
which you show in your life are stunning. Had to stop and peruse
Bodhisattva incarnate - back again to battle as youths
we've met before as kindred spirits who were craftily duped
made to forget. Made stronger with every passionate loop
and wiser through myriad lessons I've had to redo

Far and away my favorite section. Smooth as all hell, cool ideas well executed.

The part where you got overly braggadocious did seem a bit out place. Had the whole scheme, tranquil thoughts spilling with soft rhymes and then it's a swag and flow piece for a few lines. My only complaint. As a whole this was dope. You do this style well. Thanks for the read.