This was pretty good. Didn't like the punch-ins that much. And you stuck with the same rhyme scheme the whole time, which got a bit tired. I didn't read along with the lyrics, just to see if I could hear everything and your words were crisp. I'd say 95% of the time they were. Sorry if I'm critiquing this too harsh, I do that. But I was feeling this, I'd play it a few times, which is a plus lol. Keep it up man.
|