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Originally Posted by quaker oats
I felt the cyber bullying thing was shoehorned in there. If you think battling is cyber bullying, you don't quite get battling.
Overall, it was a cool little article, but def feels like he doesn't live that textcee LYFE
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I was skimming the article until they highlighted this portion
"When the lines get really serious like, 'I'm going to kill you and your whole family,'
OH DEAR. ALLOW ME A MOMENT TO RETRIEVE MY HANDKERCHIEF FROM THE GROUND BECAUSE IT FELL FROM MY BREASTPOCKET AS I WAS PRAYING TO OUR LORD AND SAVIOR IN THE FACE OF SUCH LEWD LANGUAGE. FAGGOTS. I'M PRETTY SURE BAGS USED THAT AS A DISCUSSION PUNCHLINE BEFORE HE SAID HE WOULD EAT ZELPH'S MOM'S UTERUS OR SOMETHING.
I mean, that's literally a @
Plot level classic line. They don't understand the movement. DO THEY NOT UNDERSTAND THAT CRED ONCE SAID HE WOULD CATCH YOU IN YOUR WHIP AND PUT FIRE THROUGH THE GLASS LIKE AN ART SCULPTURE? That's a little thing I like to call wordplay.
No but seriously the whole piece was just some jerk off one off, and Vice is shit. If you wrote a good piece on the text scene I'd get Certain to edit it for you for free.
Write it.