[PancakeBrah]

I AGREE WITH VULGAR AND BIG BABY WHO BOTH SAID THIS WAS DOPE/GOOD. In particular, I agree with Vulgar about the different interpretations of your work. You, black and big baby have the same effect; I always enjoy the wording/phrasing immensely but feel like I'm missing the point. Good company to be in. I thought the section big baby and Vulgar picked out was the highlight, but I also liked

You can't bare your soul and house a Hallmark heart
inside of your chest.. the sound of us, crossing arms,
finding that the Fall is done, and our own sides to our bed.

Quite a bit. Hallmark heart and the dual use of finding for each phrase.

Thanks for the read!