[Mike Wrecka]

Nice battle fellas. Two different approaches here

Artifice is obv an alias I just can't put my finger on who yet. This verse was really well crafted. The flow was really smooth. Great word choices throughout. You chose to do a more traditional topical and focus on an eye and it's different functions and purposes instead of telling a story. It worked incredible well. I did not think that you were going to be able to keep me interested in all the different aspects of and I threw an entire verse but you certainly did Really enjoyed it.


Adonis went the story telling route. The flow was well constructed but a lot of the end rhymes were rather basic and bland. Especially in the first stanza. What can I say Art out flowed you, out vocabed you and definitely delivered a more entertaining verse. That dripping in cursive line was pretty awesome. I felt like overall the piece just lacked the emotion needed to compete in this tussle. It was good just not good enough


Props fellas

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