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Old 06-09-2016, 01:01 AM   #6
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2K it seems like you been writing the exact same verse for most of this season. It's about some deep rooted personal shit with wild references that don't connect nor fit in, not even complex ones at that. Then you will have a diss or two randomly followed by more thoughts that seem to have zero direction at all. Not a good read

Jay - I wish you didn't have to waste this verse here. If you went up against a monster like NYC or Certain with this idea and expanded and fleshed out that shit would have been epic. As is, you win by default in a clear as day landslide. Original concept executed well.


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