[Adonis]

Asylum - There is something so simple about this verse that made it work on so many levels for me. Throughly enjoyed and this is honestly much closer to the form you displayed last post season when you went on that deep push. This is close to that skill level, glad you might be peeking at the right time again. I also love how you left the time fame open ended, very vague if you will, allowing us as readers to draw that conclusion on our own. Dope verse man.


AZ - The concept was decent, but nothing really came of it really. This verse was a tad uninspired even if I thoroughly enjoyed the content matter. It seemed as though there was no underlying meaning or twist, just a verse about a very influential man, that's it. This verse needed some salt and pepper badly, if that makes sense. Solid read, just not enough there.


V/asylum

more captivating