Asylum, started off very strong, dope opening bars but then quickly fell off as soon as u mentioned you had to sneeze. Obviously ran out of time this week, as did quite a few of us by the looks of it. Would've been a solid read had you finished how you wanted.
Razor, unlike your opponent you started off slow and finished strong. Flow was iffy, could've used a tad adjusting and more re detail but I understand this was a throwaway verse. However I believe you did do just enough to take it here for the more complete read.
V. Razah
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