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Just Belief · 06-01-2016, 01:44 AM

Very Deep and brimming with thought provoking intelligent lines I'm not going to even attempt choosing a favorite. More poetry than rap. Reminded me a bit of Canibus (The Rapper not weed). Some of the content here is going to go straight over peoples heads, but that seems to be the point. Each paragraph stands well on its own and could be a verse in a song. But the piece as a whole is just all over the place. No singular focus, theme or purpose that i could see, but maybe thats the star you were shooting for. Ultimately i wont deny your artistic merit, It was a good read.

06-01-2016, 01:44 AM	#2
Just Belief Emcee 4 Life Join Date: May 2016 Location: CA - L.A County Posts: 15 Rep Power: 0	Very Deep and brimming with thought provoking intelligent lines I'm not going to even attempt choosing a favorite. More poetry than rap. Reminded me a bit of Canibus (The Rapper not weed). Some of the content here is going to go straight over peoples heads, but that seems to be the point. Each paragraph stands well on its own and could be a verse in a song. But the piece as a whole is just all over the place. No singular focus, theme or purpose that i could see, but maybe thats the star you were shooting for. Ultimately i wont deny your artistic merit, It was a good read. Last edited by Just Belief; 06-01-2016 at 01:46 AM.