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Old 05-28-2016, 01:58 PM   #7
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keep posting man. Here are my thoughts ~ You hate structure, don't you. I know you understand that by limiting yourself to the confines something more gentle on the eyes or more recognizable on the mind will result. Yet you navigate away from it, due to some unforeseen need to express yourself in erratic ways or strategies. Yet sometimes like Sun Tzu 孫子 teaches us the best strategy is straightforwardness. Sometimes the best strategy is retreat, nonetheless I think being patient with the whole process and your vision will result in something as fruitful and beautiful as what you imagine it to be in your mind. It is rough, there are elements of precise diction, and I've seen you write much more tangible structures, so I know you can limit yourself so you can express that limitlessness you wish to express by having that structure. Remember the best chaos and the most beautiful is the one that exists within order.

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