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Old 05-26-2016, 11:28 PM   #10
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There were parts I liked and disliked about both. I think this battle is close.

Artifice had some really nice lines and some others that were a bit more stale. His concept was ordinary, yet effective. Razah had some nice thoughts and reflections, however his usage of the topic as his ending was not in good tastes for me. I enjoyed Razah's concept more, and both had good execution, but the fact that Razah used the topic as his last name is hard for me to overlook. Some people might like it, I wasn't a fan of it.

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