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Very precise wording and elegant diction dude. I dug the abstract feel this had. Your flow never faulted and you kept a smooth read through out. Cool take on the topic as well i thought you painted some dope imagery wity a good pace.
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This was cool too... Ypu could of put that twist in a bit more towards the middle so i couldof got a nit more of the actual demon instead of just his description. I thought that twist was dope as fuck bro but i wanted more. This was a cool read man, you wrote some i could relate to you get points for thet.
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This was a pretty even battle tbh. I think ama go with 3pa with a more complete verse in my eyes. Adonis' twist was on point but 3pa dropped some fire. Good battle fellas
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