Mr j
I wont liw to you and say i know the reference. On to the vote, this wad dope man, every line was exciting lol thats the best i can describe it. You pianted a very elaborate and calculated picture. Hour rhyming was pretty cool i like how you can make a verse or lets say one or two lines seem so casual. I love that about your writing.
Asylum
Very descriptive piece here, I enjoyed the whole verse. The way you detailed every line was dope man you immersed me that world crumbling down. Dope take on the topic. Kind of expected given the quote but you did it justice broseph. loved how it picked up the pace around the secound half of the verse. Dope shit bro
Overall
I got asylum with a more attractive verse that i wnjoyed just a bit more. Mr j was dope and he dropped a very creative idea. I just felt asylums rake on hos topic. Dope battle fellas
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