Artifice – wow this turned out to be way deeper then I thought it was originally. Shit was dope. I especially enjoyed how you rhymed imagine it with wrath & avarice. Ending line was definitely proper.
Razah – this was an EXCEPETIONALLY well woven storyline. Especially coming from a guy who doesn’t write stories very often. This piece was deep, full of material.
MVGT Razah for the more original take on his topic. I think his piece hit me harder the second time. I was leaning towards art at first.. but I think Razah took it this week.
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