lold at the tags...
anyway I thought this was a pree cool piece upon street work
the flow was pretty nice your inners & multis were impressive dawg
my first impressions are based on the way the plot seemed perfect
you blend in some smooth rhyming with an intrepid draw...
IE starting to pray because of some holy shit...
that was kind of weird but lol worthy
hollywood/all is good felt off but I rolled with it.
halls free from scum came off too wordy.
otherwise you spin a cool story with your characters brah
this would have been an interesting battle though.
nice work...
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