Asylum didn't have a bad showing but the rhyme schemes and imagery in witty's piece sort of stole the show here in my book. I liked asylum's piece but the story progression was very slow and I was left feeling unsatisfied. The finished product wasn't anything eye popping but I think Witty did a great job tieing everything together and like I said the scenary he painted won me over so I'll give this battle to him, good job guys!
V/Witty
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