Hmm wierd you both went with the same angle.
Timeless
I feel likw you had more crisp verse. I dunno it just read a bit smoother and progessed nicely through out the whols verse. I do see how you went a little left at times with the topic but we can leave that up to interpretation lol. This a dope verse and i enjoy it very much.
Razah.
The stop and go feel to your verse I enjoyed. The pauses make for a great effect when used right. You did it justice. Although i gott say man the cadance you hac goimg made me feel like you could of just kept writing right off the page lol. Loved the vibe your verse had and you stuck to the topic a bit better.
Overall
I got timeless. I think he took some chances wity his verse that payedd off in the end for him. Razah had a dope verse aswell but i felt like timeless gave me a bit more content for me to chew on. Nice battle folk
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