Razah – man this piece was pretty dope, great topical. Smooth flow, brief but enjoyable. I’m not really sure what happened, but I think there was a storyline.. dope piece tho. Your strongest point was definitely near the middle of your verse.
Timeless- man this piece was really dope but it was all over the place.. lots of dope smooth rhymes, piece read great! Great utilization of assonance and inners. Nice read.
/v razah stuck to his tone a little more, I felt his piece was a bit more cohesive as a result.
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