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Old 05-18-2016, 08:10 PM   #5
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thats netcees bro lol. i fuck with this beat tho

THEY SAY MY RHYMES ARE TOO SIMPLE
I DON'T EVEN GOTTA RHYME ITS THAT SIMPLE

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lol for real though i dug this. one of your better beats, its simple but effective. drums and bass kept me interested.

i just don't like the "tough guy" rap for lack of a better word coming from you honestly. thats what i was trying to convey in my last critiques. that track you made on my beats years ago i thought was where you should be going from a writing standpoint. more reflective, personal, don't get me wrong you were speaking about yourself on this but with a hook like lay you down its like aight. but the beat calls for it i get it, its just not YOU at least how i perceive you. but word man keep banging out
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