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breathless · 05-17-2016, 03:50 AM

It feels like, back when I started I had so much to say
my only option was the track of an artist, but now, the flow runs the same
I'll do this rap shit regardless of the fame
it's only for the love of the game

But fuck it, I've got nothing but disgust for these lames
Somehow, one hit wonders have become common household names
That's just one problem that's outgrown the grain on the down low
and it's a low down shame.

Right now I, might explode any moment
Feeling overloaded being emotionless on the outside
I've found my, motive for holding on, but, no one knows
these notions aren't real, I'm just going through the motions, God,

How am I supposed to be in control of each and every single lost broken thought?
If I could just find that fine line between the timeless infinity
And choke off the need for this primal divinity
Then I can keep in mind peace while my rivals begin to die in the streets

…sure to be forgotten of, but you gotta love it
A lot of what was something ends up brushed under rugs
lumped together with stuff that becomes nothing to us, well, before you're too sure…
ancient creatures sank to the seafloor and fell all the way to the future

It's the moment my muse returned, no control over who's concerned
with losing their turn, it's the movement,
I've earned this, I know it, but I hope it don't work against
the current I've been floating in, frozen in the turbulence

Composed amidst the urgent explosive whims I've been told to resist
But I'm holding my fist closed, I'm this close to exposing an open palm
Yet I suppose I won't, because overall
at the most I'll only fold my hands and build another broken wall

Until this enclosure falls, I'll fill myself full of compulsive flaws
that no one's saw but me, it's my own damn fault
It's okay though, I've grown too calm and complacent
I can't stay through the long haul and make any moves

'Cause what if it's the wrong one, or nothing in my songs come true?
What if what I thought was the small stuff grows strong once involved and it really is the awful truth?
That'd be awesome dude

05-17-2016, 03:50 AM	#3
breathless Master of Beastiality Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Lansing, Mi Posts: 368 Battle Record: 4-6 Rep Power: 0	It feels like, back when I started I had so much to say my only option was the track of an artist, but now, the flow runs the same I'll do this rap shit regardless of the fame it's only for the love of the game But fuck it, I've got nothing but disgust for these lames Somehow, one hit wonders have become common household names That's just one problem that's outgrown the grain on the down low and it's a low down shame. Right now I, might explode any moment Feeling overloaded being emotionless on the outside I've found my, motive for holding on, but, no one knows these notions aren't real, I'm just going through the motions, God, How am I supposed to be in control of each and every single lost broken thought? If I could just find that fine line between the timeless infinity And choke off the need for this primal divinity Then I can keep in mind peace while my rivals begin to die in the streets …sure to be forgotten of, but you gotta love it A lot of what was something ends up brushed under rugs lumped together with stuff that becomes nothing to us, well, before you're too sure… ancient creatures sank to the seafloor and fell all the way to the future It's the moment my muse returned, no control over who's concerned with losing their turn, it's the movement, I've earned this, I know it, but I hope it don't work against the current I've been floating in, frozen in the turbulence Composed amidst the urgent explosive whims I've been told to resist But I'm holding my fist closed, I'm this close to exposing an open palm Yet I suppose I won't, because overall at the most I'll only fold my hands and build another broken wall Until this enclosure falls, I'll fill myself full of compulsive flaws that no one's saw but me, it's my own damn fault It's okay though, I've grown too calm and complacent I can't stay through the long haul and make any moves 'Cause what if it's the wrong one, or nothing in my songs come true? What if what I thought was the small stuff grows strong once involved and it really is the awful truth? That'd be awesome dude __________________ I used to be amazing... http://soundcloud.com/dancourser/sets Last edited by breathless; 05-17-2016 at 03:59 AM.