bleak - the whole start of you verse is on point!, those where some real nice multis and you stayed on topic. I like the first half better then the ending bit though., but very solid up until those last few lines. 8/10
split - you stretched your scheme out a little bit to long I think, you had some nice rhymes in there though, also stayed on topic well. I like how you referenced mad max there but then killed it for me with the penis comment.
I'm closer than I appear. Shit, the Stig couldn't fuck with this- i been drunk off the power surge,
that line I really like though, but i'm going to have to give this to bleak, he just killed it at the start there
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