[Ghost1]

U never in ur life groped boobies ur girl got me on speedial wanting to do me
Leave that pussy in a Apocalypse creampie with the effects of a new xmen movie

Lol idk...is apocalypse a wordplay? Or just like a literal cream pie apocalypse. ...lol gross...this is a miss for me...maybe I'm missing something here

Uzi on me at all times u never held a gun so y the fuck u brag n boast
Cuz Once the heat burn ya it'll leave u darker then a Barc n Toil pic roast

This is ok

I dont think you wanna approach me in person hardguy routine aint working
Once i shoot If i give em eighty pop up from his grave signing "Im like a Virgin"

80s pop is a dope concept....wording hurting u here tho...also a bit too animated....idve gon w something a bit darker....have them 80s pop on ya without the vh1 special

Trigger finger aint working plus he got the aim of a scrub
When i the grip rubber duck, he gonna scream when the barrel sing like Ernie in the tub

Lol this is good

Soft like a lioncub why he even mean mug n grab his crotch
Keep playing Little Big Shot ill kill this kid with talent n make Steve Harvey Watch

Again this is like ur 80s pop line....they're too goofy....the concept is there...but I feel like ur tie ins make the punch come off as unrealistic/cartoony.....for me u want these type of lines to come off as gritty as possible since it's not a comedy bar

U cant hit ur chicks spot that inchworm aint got a dying chance
I'll fuck her my favorite style hand on the ground pelvic thrusting like the salt n pepa dance

Disgusting mental image here smh




I'm chilling pulling thrilling chicks u getting none, FACT
only time u ever been associated w/ a bitch is moaning like one in the chat

Light

Teach ya a lesson that'll have ya body on a stretcher
one shot'll have ya brain in parts allover the board that's a neurosurgeon lecture

Concept ok if not played...execution lacking

got a Long range or short aim the scope'll leave him toast
While if joe switching sights it's between RB n NC cus he getting bullied off both

WOOO ok picking up steam

Sharps mag got me hyped up man it was mean
Made me wanna go 16... just to see this fag banned from the league

Lol ok ok

Beating joes nothing to brag we know this faggot can't write
so this'll be Amir knockout when I drop u w/ one punch like the Kahn fight

This is cool

Will edit in 2 more if I get time

Mann this may have fucked j


Lemme look back over this god damnit lotto


So switching sites vs elmo

Liked elmo better an with a bar missing from lotto I'd have to say Joe landed more....tho w that last bar with an average connection lotto would've won this. Stop bein lazy bruh.

V jb