[Ghost1]

Fuck it..

OH SHIT WATCH OUT

Another corpse, my real hobby’s killing a queer promptly
so watch me murder this imaginary friend just to leave a clear body.

Light

Better be in a bulletproof suit, cuz when I fire & shoot..
can’t refute the size of the big hawk, the Stick Talks like ‘I Am Groot’.

This is cool

Lol’d as I wrote this, beat me, must be high & hopeless..
fool how are u OGsmoking, yet u don’t have an ounce of dopeness?

WOOO haha aight now we cookin

Hoes gimme that body language, I stay piping strangers
while if a bitch ever sends Smoke signals, it’s cuz her life’s in danger.

Idk if this is played on him but I fucks w this heavy haha

Face it, RM only brings average shit, u ain’t damaging..
bunch of lames throwing the same trash - that’s waste management.

Light

The 4-4 wicked, so u better be easy hoe, know yo limits,
bitch if u’re cross w/ me after I flash the gun, shit’ll be a photo finish.

This is ok

..BODY.


When you say you spray niggas, I like to be believe there's some truth in the mix.
Cause you a pepper spray key chain nigga,something you gotta fix,

Lmao concept is cool....wording leaves this punch anticlimactic tho...like ur punch is in the wrong place...I'll try an explain this better in the mag

you'll wont catch Schadenfreude without mase like puffy in 96'
Broke ass nigga, Mr. let me get the password to your Netflix.

Lol this is light....funny tho

But fuck all that...
I got a tec with holes surrounding the barrel like bums in a Ny winter scene.
Ill Gomez Adams, Schadenfreude stretch him with the machine.

Surrounding the barrel should've been ur punch an machine should've been the set up. Surround the barrel was was fly

More shots Riddling/Ritalin his body then a class full of AdHD teens.
Let your man intervene,..but when I say man I mean your gay lover.

Same here....Ritalin is ur strong flip here

I'll pistol whip him til its a jus a bloody body like dmx 2nd album cover.
You talk a good game, dnt mean shit to a nigga who lived it tho.

U trolling me? This the new punch then set up style? Lol DMX was dope

I'm not buying your wolf tickets, White fang came out years ago.
Ill grab the 38snub make you go nose to nose now kiss the eskimo.

Lol Eskimo kiss is a dope concept....wording hurt u here...also wolf ticket/white fang was dope haha

Aight so having read og for the first time pretty much........feminists me of a more creative mftastik w even poorer line placement choices haha. Some of those concepts I could use an make a craaaaaazy fuckin verse....but u got to learn how and where to use them....as it stands shade was way more polished....which to be fair he is alot more polished then half the league...still tho as much as I'd like to hand out a dub based on creativity an concepts og verse was just tooooo sloppy here. Enjoyed the read on both sides tho.

V shade