Reza
Listen I'm snatchin this w like a purse. F that moral shit pa
After this al will have more flowers cross the chest than a floral print bra
Nice metaphore
Fuck ya accomplishments. What ya done means nothing, deadbeat.
Cuz the shots I'll sinew will make him sick. Like an adversion to redmeat
Nice metaphore again but u fucked up on wording lol send u them him shoulda edited before u dropped other then that stil an ok hit
Couldn't see me with 10 pairs of eyes
Only reason your here at all. Is mom took too long getting sterilized
Nah
I don't respect you. You'll barely put up a fight
Your cred took a shot when he pummeled you fight night
Ok jab at a personal
With 8 arms you couldn't throw a str8 jab. You gots to die
Stuff his ass in a blender, add sum milk and turn octopi
What??? Setup wasnt even relevant with finisher
Fake mod. Got ya position by licking mag's ass
Grind his bones into dust. Throw it in a sack.. Now that's a sand bag
Fucker...
Noooo
Allen
u'll get sprayed for reppin crip or blood, faggot lead'll spew
Captian America shield hittin Iron Man, a spark on ur chest over red & blue
Nice flip creative finish twist off ur setup
i wyle out for doe, i go pyshco wen the mag rips ur soul in half
once i Wallets acouple shots to the cranium & then i'll hold ur cash
Cool wordplay
for kilos of dope, got u in my scope bout to get ya wig rocked
over acouple of bricks, them hollows give u a death touch like a Dim Mak
Dope metaphore
slice ya till u have to hit the ER for stitches & im pokin up ya friends
once Re-Released from the ICU i'll stab this fag till his shit opens up again
Lol damn nice direct hit ok nameplay
straight executing this slut, got the torch to ya eye fam
u'll get one Shah thru the skull pussy then i'll bury ur corpse in Iran
Nice wordplay flip
try to run up & talk shit faggot, my fists offing ur kind
if Reflex on me then i'll break his jaw w/ out a thought in my mind
Good nameplay
Allen took this pretty comfortably i wouldve like to see nameflips other than a basic re cuz reza is his name coulda did some rez flips but what was fresh u had creative shit to go with it which made it look too easy. Reza ur opener was dope ur 2nd bar i liked but damn stop rushing. If u had more metaphorical content like that first bar u can be a problem.
V/Allen
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