NYC – great end of days piece. Very nice work. I enjoyed the scenery immensely and wondered about your characters back story a bit. Not complaining, it’s a compliment. I wanted more while satisfied.
Breathless – that shit’s wicked bro you gotta stay away from that brown-brown and cop that nice lady. Gonna fuck around and have an aneurism overheating. Anyway, the piece was dope it’s a familiar malady, I enjoyed the entirety of the piece and am satisified with it as a whole.
/v nyc came a little bit stronger and his piece had a more profound effect. i think if breathless had killed off his character and gave a vivid death scene it would’ve won.
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