[Adonis]

Em - "How its given me belief". "Beneath eyelids" is a nice thought, but adding the word crazy as an adjective is in newbie form my man, you're better then this on your worst night, apparently not on a binger though huh? ;) This was a relatively unimpressive verse though honestly. Wording was off, either by simple grammar at times or just by a sloppy hand at others. Not a fan brother, you can't win them all. I know you didn't put your best foot forward here, sorry for being honest. And post that mag fucker.

Z - Voting for you, I liked the saga of sorts, a bit introspective and real cockiness that was not off-putting. I imagine this was a fun verse to write, the amount of ammunition you have at your arsenal, surprised you kept it short. Dope read though. Your flow is whack man ;) Sorry you beat me last week, I rarely struggle with topics, and it happened but I take nothing away from the loss. I do have something like 4 starts to concepts because of it, nothing really worked for me though.


v/ Razah

Far better wording on top of executing a cleaner concept