I mean witty basically put together a casual key which comes across as slightly profound and aphoristic because he's generally a smart dude and a good writer, but it was a key pure and simple, thoughtless and lazy as fuck. Just cuz you can key some shit with undertones of what lao-tzu would have written if he were english doesn't make it good it makes you lazy. You had the verse written out so you might as well have tried to replicate it better than you did it was cool but obviously a rushed key...
Jesodist this was fragmented and all over the place. It sounds like something eminem would've written at 25 years old, drunk and barely visible in Kim's hazy clouds of Meth smoke. I don't really understand wtf you were doing here but some rhymes were cool. It doesn't really follow the rules of english too well but sounds like the type of violent incoherent rhyming material that would sound savage if it was freestyled in an off the dome cypher with your favorite pals from your favorite low-class neighborhood. I hate to do it but I'm gonna have to give you the vote because witty didn't even try.
V/ Jesodist
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