Yo, this battle could go either way.
Solid verses from both, and here's my breakdown. Artifice, the story was cool. No 'ahh that was dope' lines, but I rarely see those in stories. The wording & rhyming was super smooth. To me, that's what made your verse dope. I was able to read along with having to stop & find the flow or anything, nice smooth read.
Adverse had a dope story. Story wise, you easily beat Artifice. What hurt you, is what made Artifice's verse so good to me.. certain words you choose, the flow of it, the length of each bar (going from less syllables to a noticeable difference really messes the way I read it). So yeah, this is why I feel it could go either way, Adverse had a dope twist, and Artifice had the smoother read. In my eyes, Im'a always have to go with the smoother read. If Adverse would have touched up some lines here & there & made it smoother, I would've given him the vote easily.
vArtifice
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