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Old 05-12-2016, 09:36 PM   #6
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Adonis, dope verse. I really fuck with the concept, was not expecting that at all. That's what's up man, good shit. If I remember right, this is the second 'sneak diss' towards Mr. J, and the better of the two (that I read).

Also, I'm finding it difficult to see how we write alike (your words, not mine). The second half of your verse was more 'poetic' and less multi rhyming, which is something I rarely do. I dunno, just some random shit. Anyways, solid verse man.

Mr. J, this shit was dope too. Best battle I've read so far. Story telling was on point, it was kind of a long verse, but the 'action' kept me intrigued. Describing burning tires, turning on certain streets, all that shit made it super on point.

Tough vote, but, I think I enjoyed Mr. J's verse slightly more. SLIGHTLY more, very dope battle though guys.

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