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Old 05-12-2016, 09:31 PM   #7
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So uh, this is Baron's prodigy huh.

I'll take your word for it being a 'key' but still.. Anyways, not a big fan of Jesodist style honestly. The words he uses, his 'hell & demons' being his go to ideas, his syllables being off.. eh, not my cup of tea.

Nonetheless, I felt he had the stronger verse.

Quote:
Should be stupid of me but a Note to the Wise, He bullied me for Most of my Life,
The Demonic Murmurs aren't Right, Send his Soul to the Light on a Tour with the Christ,
"Slit his Tonsils with a Knife infront of Hundreds on Sight for Fucking your Wife"
His internals kept that flowing smoothly. I think his 'dark' ideas can one day be a great verse, as long as he made sure all the other technical aspects were on point.

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