MMLP, I thought this was an interesting verse from the start
your smooth flow was missing & it made my observance kind of hard
but you do sprinkle some great references that made me think ohhh..
I enjoy the first person aspect but like I said you are missing the crazy ass flow
if you brought that same intensity from that time I would be in awe
the conquer/promise multi had me feeling dirty but the rest of this was raw
would have loved to see a little reflection from the Infinite days though
regardless a nice flashback piece from far beyond the rainbow...
Razah, I thought this was a pretty cool presentation
the writers reflection dwelling upon the recent changes
you seemed to take it in the same route MMLP did.
but it was about yourself & a lot of the ideas were decent..
but you really shine towards the reveal of your route
its nice to go back & understand your reason now.
a proper story to fit the shoes of your topic.
Im impressed with the flow & how you usually process...
the idea...great to have you back...nice to see ya.
v/this was an impressive battle & well worth the read.
one of the ones I have been hoping for most currently.
or is it most recently? I haven't had much to complain about here
a few slip ups from both but for their topics the aim was clear.
MMLP took a route that I would have never thought of.
while Razah focused on himself & how his style was brought up
this is more based around who I felt delivered a stronger piece
& even though I really enjoyed the direction brought by MMLP
Razah just came smoother with something to relate to.
this was a great clash of styles & such a great duel...
v/Razah
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