Witty this had potential bro to bad you deleted yoir piece i havent read pne pf yours in a while.
Jesodist
Yeah bro this was ok. Tbh i dont know what to think of it. You gave me so many scenes packed into each line i dont know which one is the main focus. Your saying so mich bit at the same time nothing at all. One line urked me. And tbh i shouldn't be one to take, ask around lol....but
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This calls for the Meticulous Slayers of the most Conspicuous Players,
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None of that really made sense. To much rhyming bruh, and on top of that. Did you mean to use slayers just to rhyme with players? Cuz i feel like SLAYING OF THE MOST. Makes a lot more sense.
Dunno just my opinion bruh.
Vote. Jesodist because wittys verse is clearly a no show verse.